Emily and the Oracle

Alright- some things fixed up. However, I'd like to, er...critique your critique. I know this is terribly rude, but I want to point some...er, some things out. First off- dialogue. ...

Alright, in my defense, this chapter was written without the first chapter in front of me, and therefore I couldn't get in the mood, nor did I have an actual ...

I'm terribly sorry but I have to go somewhere. I'm definitely going to critique this story when I get back, so please be patient! I only read the very first ...

I've never read a story like this, but I'll try to help. First off, try capitalizing the letter at the beginning of every line...though I'm not sure if that is ...

I say try to avoid everything you think is cliche, and just have fun! That's the point of writing every novel, isn't it? I like all vampires story- cliche or ...

Esme- After your critique, I said exactly this: "Whooa." Gave me a headache, it did! But I also nearly fainted with love for you. It made me realize so many ...

Well, it doesn't take too hard to figure out what the woman in the woods is (I think that's the one you were talking about?). Kathira is cold, lost in ...

Ah, ah, yes, I...I did write that. I'm glad you...enjoy the title? I...I really enjoy all critique I can get, so I'm..er, I'm very glad you plan on reviewing it. ...

8/10- I'm not sure I understand it fully, but it amuses me nonetheless.

5/10 - It's pretty, and gives good imagery, but it isn't very interesting.

Chapter Two: Thawing I hadn’t realized I had fallen asleep. Or perhaps I hadn’t slept. Maybe I had just drifted into unconsciousness to escape the bitter cold. Either way, when ...

This was a semi-good poem. Some things could be worked on, however. 1- Vocabulary. There are some pretty simple words here, none that interest me or pull me into the ...

I do enjoy this poem so very much! I've reread it several times, and I don't see anything wrong with it! I know I'm supposed to be helping, but there ...

I really enjoyed this poem! The one thing that bugged me, however, was the last line of the poem. What ignorance led me to ignore her? 1. Who are you ...

Hmmm...I have quite a lot to say about this poem. To start off! You repeatedly make 'I' a lowercase. This is no, no, and no . First off, if you ...